Escape for honey Page 3

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         The srong bee hug Dandan in his boson(怀）and brought him out the enemies surroundings. The enemy insects were very angry because “The mature duck had flied.”. They aied at the strong bee. And pushed attack one after one. But so strong the bee is. He defended all attack like the blowing wind. When the strong bee and enemy insects were in tangled fight., Dandan ran away quickly Dandan ran towards to the front, not daring to look back . On the other hand , The strong bee was still fighting with the enemies. But his ability was GOD LIKE. It had never seen such a strong bee, Facing mantis(螳螂) blackant(黑蚂蚁)wasp（胡蜂）and chafer(花金龟),these four insects who like eat bees, he was not nervous and frightened. Just a few minutes, all enemies wew down. The strong bee was very proud of himself. His face that time like a demon. When he was ready to finish the enemies, a red eye bee appeared before him and try to persuade him to stop killing. He said: ”So, so powerful, The proverb goes that we can not know each other without fighting. Now all of us have seen you great power. Why don’t we pay respect to you and regard you as our chieftain?” ”What a good idea!” “That sounds good” said the four insects. The strong bee withdrew his fist and said: “Chieftain? It sounds very interesting. OK, I receive the position.” “Our chieftain for ever!” Insects shouted. And the red eye bee suggested that: “Today is the first you become the chieftain. To express my respect ,I wanna invite you to my honeycomb to have some sweet honey.”…………….Something not peaceful perhaps would happen        Change the site. After getting rid of the tangled fight, Dandan went on running and on the way he met a kind Dung Beetle(屎壳螂)Uncle. The uncle let Dandan stay at his home for a night and told Dandan a lot of knowledge about the insects.
Tomorrow morning, Dandan said goodbye to Dung Beetle(屎壳螂)Uncle. Using the knowledge he learnt from Dung Beetle Uncle, he avoid many bees’ natural enemies’ killing. After a night rest, Dandan was full of energy. He walked on the road, singing and dancing, enjoying the nice natural scenery. It was the first time he could see such peaceful and wonderful nature since he became a bee. The river flew slowly, the wind blew slightly, the birds tweeted sweetly. The white cloud ran after the red sun.
        With happiness and beautiful scenery, Dandan continuously walked, At last he reached the destination honeycomb…………What would happen in this place???

我缩短了篇幅。。。。。至于翻译，这工作量实在太大..........没心情写了........期盼第一个伯乐吧

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回复 4# xukaiyu


    嘿 从设计的角度来讲
    感觉这次比上次看起来舒服点了 因为字体粗了 呵呵
    突然想起如果这里面有衬线字体就更好了

呵呵 确实字体要看起来舒服多了

我也想过，字太小会让人不想看，字太多也会让人不想看..........排版方面给点建议额~~~~~~~自娱自乐，呵呵

你每个自然段之间可以空行 每个自然段都用不同的颜色 这样可能会看起来舒服些

回复 8# 非绿有语


    很好的建议 哈哈 可以的话字再大一点

恩,我调整了试试